After getting feedback from my second draft, these are the main point where I want and need to improve;
The first is, putting the present title before the title to keep the audience interested in the topic, then redoing the voice-over by asking the question and not answering them and keeping the audience on edge by asking the questions and not giving the narrative away.
Cut the music sooner and change some for a less dramatic effect and more happy and cheerful, adding some welsh rugby fan footage.
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