After getting feedback from my first draft these are the main point where I want and need to improve;
The first being was to get rid of the focus as it is seen as unprofessional and clumsy, then introduce my topic the title, and credit sooner so that the audience doesn't get bored of the start and keeps engaged.
Then need to add headings for the interview, also fix spelling mistakes in the question, adding more clips over the top of the interview so that it keeps the audience engaged and also keeps it more visual.
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